1. Honey

    Honey on 12/22/2005 4:53 p.m. #

    Hands, hands<br />
    Everywhere<br />
    It’s hard to determine<br />
    The ones that care<br />
    <br />
    As they<br />
    <br />
    Grab a dollar<br />
    Cop a feel<br />
    Size you up<br />
    Shake on a deal<br />
    Drag you left<br />
    Shove you right<br />
    Slap your face<br />
    Test your might<br />
    Beckon you come<br />
    Wave you on<br />
    Gesture expletives<br />
    Or are quickly withdrawn<br />
    <br />
    Don’t ever fear to offer them forward<br />
    But realise they are among a horde<br />
    And the hands of time weigh the value of each<br />
    Bringing to light those worthy the reach.<br />
    <br />
    Those of which<br />
    <br />
    Bear healing within<br />
    Wipe away tears<br />
    Raise a chin<br />
    Keep touch through the years<br />
    Ply soft a hard heart<br />
    Hold forth to share<br />
    Draw close those apart<br />
    Carry burdens of care<br />
    Achievement applaud<br />
    Build bridges of love<br />
    And when held in accord<br />
    They fit like a glove<br />
    <br />
    Hands, hands<br />
    Everywhere<br />
    Hold onto those<br />
    You find to care<br />

  2. Mike Fletcher

    Mike Fletcher on 12/22/2005 5:39 p.m. #

    I'm beginning to think you're spending more time on the comments than I do on the posts :) . Thank you.<br />
    <br />
    I'm wondering if the line "Or are quickly withdrawn" would work as well as "Quickly withdrawn"; it would then both comment on the line before and stand alone then which would give the reader a slowing pool/eddy before the switch to the longer line form.

  3. Honey

    Honey on 12/22/2005 7:35 p.m. #

    i imagine you're right...seems it's my job :)<br />
    <br />
    i did ponder on that line at it's writing but i really wanted to disassociate it from the line above. will give it more consideration a little later. thanks muchly for the thought :)<br />
    <br />
    well i'm done here for the year.<br />
    <br />
    peace and joyous festivities to you.<br />
    <br />

  4. Mike Fletcher

    Mike Fletcher on 12/22/2005 11:08 p.m. #

    Sheesh, 8 day vacations! And with the kind of rates you're charging!<br />
    <br />
    Have fun, and happy solstice to you!

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